Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Development

I have decided to stick with my proposal of a short film using split screen. I am wanting my style to be gritty and dark and so have devised a shoot schedule for tomorrows shoot.
Everything seems underway and I am really exited to start this. I was apprehensive at first because I am creating this all alone as opposed to always having worked in a team, however I must admit I do love the fact that it is all my own work and so I can change something if I am not happy about it, instead of being talked over by a team mate and going with an idea they think is worth good grade (which unfortunately has happened many a time before). I am enjoying having free reign on this project and feel it is helping me to become much more confident in using the equipment and eventually when in post production, the editing software I so often shy away from!
I have kindly been given permission to film at my friends house over in Chester (whom is acting in the film) and propose to do so tomorrow morning. I am aware it will be a long day what with making this alone, but I am confident that it will go to plan; having a clear outlined shoot schedule definatly helps with this!
I propose to film as much as possible tomorrow and then head back the following week for any pick up shots I may have missed which I can imagine will be a few as one year olds do not usually conform to what you are asking of them!

Below is a detailed shoot schedule I will be using when filming. I have highlighted the scenes where I will be using the child so that we can get his scenes shot first so as to keep him occupied enough so that he falls asleep, in order for us to shoot the rest of the film. I aim to have many close up shots of both characters so to give the audience that isolated feel. I also want the entire film shot in the house, especially the prostitution scene as I feel this gives the feel of character feeling trapped with no other way out.


Shot List
 Jen -mother
Leo - child
WS – wide shot
CU – close up
MS – mid shot
Shoot for at least 10 seconds at a time

Opening scene:
CU Jen in bed
CU feet twitching
Cu alarm going off
MS Jen waking up sitting edge of bed
CU grabs dressing gown
WS walks into bathroom - from outside bathroom door 

Cut to 

Running bath –
Mid shot using tracker outside bathroom, Jen in dressing gown.
Jenny running a bath
CU tap running
CU jen brushing teeth
CU taps running - use split screen here
CU of jen’s feet, drops dressing gown on floor

Cut to

CU jen wiggling toes
Tracking shot of jen moving down into bath
CU using jib or stedicam over jen – puts head nearly fully immersed in water, slowly closes her eyes. Takes deep breathe
CU pull focus from behind empty bubble bath bottle
CU jen startled, opens eyes!

Complete silence - or use music throughout, determine this in edit. 

CU jens feet getting out of bath
CU grabs towel
Tracking shot of leo in room crying alone
CU water swirling down plug hole
Tracking shot jen walking into leos room, takes him from bed/cot
CU leos face on jens shoulder


Stedi cam follow jen leaving room to go downstairs carrying leo
Stedi cam stay at top of stairs
Tracking shot from bottom of stairs of both coming downstairs
CU leos hands or feet or eyes

Cut to - 
Downstairs scene:

MS places leo down or in high chair, he sits happily
MS jen turns of cartoons

Ext Shot - Split screen
CU of the door number 
MS of post being put through door
CU landing on the floor
CU of jen opening letters worringly
MS walks into kitchen
CU throws letters down

Split screen -  
CU boils kettle pull focus with letters in view
CU putting last piece of bread in toaster
CU putting coffee in cup – not much in jar
CU leo playing happily
CU takes milk from empty fridge nearly used it all
CU pours water into cup

CU jen holding cup to face, sipping staring vacantly outside

Jib shot of jens feet then pans out to her walking into kitchen, leo still in shot
MC opening cupboard to find hardly anything, and fridge
Place camera in one of the cupboards, opens looks sad, closes cupboard.
Rummages through bag for purse CU pull focus with letters in shot

Split screen - 
CU opens purse, few change. – shakes purse
CU takes letters
Tracking shot sits down
CU opens letters
CU eyes reading
CU still of letters overdue, rent electric ect

Cut to

Tracking shot her reading sat there
Over shoulder shot puts down looks over to leo – use jib for this?
Takes papers
CU pan of job pages –do about 4 of these
CU eyes  - sighs

CU marking one job with a question mark
MS pull focus on leo crying jenny walking over to him from behind, picks him up
CU leos face on her sholdour
CU jens face

Cut To


CU jens feet
Tracking shot walking into leos room – sits him on her knee
CU his face looking up
CU her face looking down smiling

CU looking for nappies,
MS pull focus behind empty nappie wrapper of jen changing nappie
 Follow with stedi cam down stairs
CU leos face on her sholdour
CU placing leo down

Cut  To

MS goes to kitchen
CU puts leos clothes in washer
CU uses last of washing powder
CU throws in bin
CU getting her own clothes out of laundry basket
CU smells it
CU head popping through t shirt took out of laundry


CU counts change on side in kitchen/table (letters still in focus or empty milk carton ect)
CU her putting on leos shoes
CU putting own shoes on
CU grabs keys

Cut To

Jib shot of jenny couting money from purse
CU counting change left
Ms Leo playing
Tracking shot of this from in front of the table too

CU jen re reading text from before
CU clock at half n hour before text time
MS looks at leo
CU leo happy playing

MS jen sits back in setea
CU looks vacant, hand over face – worried, anxious
WA camera pans out – symmetrical

CU leo swinging legs
CU his eyes smiling
CU jens looking anxious at camera

CU kisses leo on the head
Tracking shot jenny leaving leo goes upstairs
CU feet
CU hands anxious?
MS jen sitting on bed

Cut To prostitution scene

CU painting nails
CU putting on eye make up
CU putting on lipstick
CU leo happy watching cartoon – jib shot him on his own walking about maybe

CU gets condoms out of drawer
MS looks at self in mirror – vacant expression – all done up
Jib shot of full-length jen dressed up looking in mirror or outside?
Tracking shot of door slightly ajar

CU throat gulping
MS Leo playing again
CU in contrast Leo’s happy face
CU Jens anxious face


Finishing shots

Jib shots of leo playing wide angle
Jib shot of jenny going into room and shutting door behind her. Looks at camera.
Zoom out slowly from door.


END.

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